Post by clawpaw on Nov 19, 2013 9:57:56 GMT -5
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While I was re-reading my NaNoWriMo story, I realized that it had a lot of flaws. However, my parents want me to show them it at the end of the month, and I would prefer to have a better story by then XD I was speed-writing when I wrote this, so I believe a lot of it will suck, so don't be afraid to do some harsh criticisms. If you do, please tell me exactly what your criticism it, why you critiscised it, and (optional) some ideas on how I can fix this in a timely manner.
I will be greatful for your help in making this novel better
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While I was re-reading my NaNoWriMo story, I realized that it had a lot of flaws. However, my parents want me to show them it at the end of the month, and I would prefer to have a better story by then XD I was speed-writing when I wrote this, so I believe a lot of it will suck, so don't be afraid to do some harsh criticisms. If you do, please tell me exactly what your criticism it, why you critiscised it, and (optional) some ideas on how I can fix this in a timely manner.
I will be greatful for your help in making this novel better
